Blood Will Tell我算是又重看了一次，第四次了吧。
這篇不得了的文翻成中文就失去很多美感。
因為原文用詞相當白話，寫得非常順暢，一經過翻譯那份順暢就不見了。
繼續努力。

先來截錄另一篇昨晚找到的寶吧。

-- James, who shook his head as if to erase from his memory his temporary weakness and went to sit in his chair. It was only at that moment that Remus noticed its high back and deep sitting -- it resembled so much a medieval throne. As if Sirius and him were merely entertainers for the court.

此段是我覺得寫最生動的地方，都想喘息了(有多誇張)
同樣地，是要整篇看下來才產生的感覺。
其他還有太多地方太萌，例如：

-- "A Ravenclaw girl, I hope?" James asked.

"Of course, love ' you don't think I would let any other dicks," Sirius said, pointing in turn at his friend and his lover's cocks, "get near my arse, do you?"

"What about your mouth?" Remus asked after a moment.

Sirius laughed, bent to kiss him and left, leaving them with quizzical looks on their faces.


這篇要翻譯出來會是大工程，
因為動作都描寫的很詳細，依然流暢得很有美感。

這是一篇劫盜3P+SM的文。寫超好我的天
先不管那肉戲的描寫好了，(我對SM反感)
人物關係寫太好。
並不是指那確實能被稱為崩壞的關係，而是分別地位與氛圍，簡直就是我的理想。
以前會經由看文將內心的角色加上自己的思想塑造得更鮮明，
但劫盜，尤其是鹿犬，完全是由原作形成的，
所以能找到這麼與自己理想相似，實在令人激昂...

尤其是James，完全就是我心中的James啊啊啊啊。
他竟然可以如此稱職地喳!
結尾的他也非常喳。
只論結尾的話，那本是個相當普通的走向，
但接上整個劇情就是喳到了極點。
我推崇到難以形容了

結尾竟然是悲的，非常悲，且悲得極具格調=口=